This was my initial plan of ideas without sound.
I feel some of the clips are to dark and this is something I will look at when it comes to my next ruff cut.
Also there are no inter titles as of yet. When asking audience for feedback, the most useful thing I taken from it is that they didn't like the distorted scene at the end.
Jade Freeman said
" I like the overall idea, and the story line attempting to come through yet I feel the shots are to slow and there needs to be something in the middle to speed them up. I don't think as of yet it really flows but its a good starting point. I also think that the end could be a bit tidier as I don't think the distortion really works or is effective it looks a bit random along with the rest of your trailer.
